my sonnet
I sleep in dream caught up on times once spentA gift to me would be to stay like thisA ray of light beams through a shade thats bentI throw my socks to fix the blade but missThe sun so bright pushed...
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Hi Danielle,Well, lemme give it a try.I sleep in dream caught up on times once spent["Caught up on": Is this correct English?]A gift to me would be to stay like this[This is a most promising line!]A...
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Danielle,Of course Crispin has given you quite a few good and sound pieces of advice as to the poetic side of your sonnet. But for my part I want to stress the fact that your poem is technically very...
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Hi Danielle,I never really post any comments, since i am still a beginner and don't have a lot to say. i just want to tell you that i came to this board without the slightest idea about what a sonnet...
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I was just wondering if english is your first language?These grammatical structures I remember quite well from Montreal, the Montreal of my youth.Whatever, the visual images of the poem are quite...
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Yes english is my first language. Thanks for your comments and i will continue to write. This was my first time and it was an assignment but i really enjoyed it. I have tons of others written but...
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Welcome to the wonderful and whacky world of sonnet writing! I want to make one general point that will help you alot--even if it makes me sound like a 19th century schoolmarm. Punctuation! The free...
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